Can I get some opinions on this Desiderata poem?

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Hey guys, just wanted to get some (theological) opinions on this 1927 prose poem by Max Ehrmann called Desiderata that another Catholic (who I believe thinks highly of it) gave to me recently:

Go placidly amid the noise and haste, and remember what peace there may be in silence.
As far as possible without surrender be on good terms with all persons.
Speak your truth quietly and clearly; and listen to others, even the dull and the ignorant; they too have their story.
Avoid loud and aggressive persons, they are vexations to the spirit.
If you compare yourself with others, you may become vain and bitter; for always there will be greater and lesser persons than yourself.
Enjoy your achievements as well as your plans. Keep interested in your own career, however humble; it is a real possession in the changing fortunes of time.
Exercise caution in your business affairs; for the world is full of trickery.
But let this not blind you to what virtue there is; many persons strive for high ideals; and everywhere life is full of heroism.
Be yourself. Especially, do not feign affection.
Neither be cynical about love; for in the face of all aridity and disenchantment it is as perennial as the grass.
Take kindly the counsel of the years, gracefully surrendering the things of youth.
Nurture strength of spirit to shield you in sudden misfortune. But do not distress yourself with dark imaginings.
Many fears are born of fatigue and loneliness. Beyond a wholesome discipline, be gentle with yourself.
You are a child of the universe, no less than the trees and the stars; you have a right to be here. And whether or not it is clear to you, no doubt the universe is unfolding as it should.
Therefore be at peace with God, whatever you conceive Him to be, and whatever your labors and aspirations, in the noisy confusion of life keep peace with your soul.
With all its sham, drudgery, and broken dreams, it is still a beautiful world.
Be cheerful. Strive to be happy.


For the most part, I think I can agree with what’s said. However, near the end of it, especially the parts where I bolded, something just doesn’t feel right about it. I almost kind of feel like things just aren’t seen in the correct Catholic perspective, I guess. Like this is how a New Ager might perceive things. 🤷
 
I can’t offer an informed opinion on whether those bolded lines are at odds with Catholicism, but I sure hope not. I love the Desiderata! 🙂
 
Being a “child of the universe,” is how God created my physical being. Although unknown in the 20s, I’m down with being created from “star stuff.”

As far as one’s comprehension of God, that goes to “Is there salvation outside of the Church?” The answer from the Catechism is (poorly paraphrased by me), “It’s likely, leave it up to God. As Catholics, however, we have a separate set of disciplines and are called to evangelize.”

In proper context of our faith, the Desiderata doesn’t contradict anything.
 
I had that poem memorized at one point. I like all of it. I think the poem is “spot on” about a bunch of things.

Alcoholics Anonymous does something similar in its wording, “higher power”, but it is referring to God, just trying to reach, and include, a broader base of people of many faiths.
 
Hey guys, just wanted to get some (theological) opinions on this 1927 prose poem by Max Ehrmann called Desiderata that another Catholic (who I believe thinks highly of it) gave to me recently:

Go placidly amid the noise and haste, and remember what peace there may be in silence.
As far as possible without surrender be on good terms with all persons.
Speak your truth quietly and clearly; and listen to others, even the dull and the ignorant; they too have their story.
Avoid loud and aggressive persons, they are vexations to the spirit.
If you compare yourself with others, you may become vain and bitter; for always there will be greater and lesser persons than yourself.
Enjoy your achievements as well as your plans. Keep interested in your own career, however humble; it is a real possession in the changing fortunes of time.
Exercise caution in your business affairs; for the world is full of trickery.
But let this not blind you to what virtue there is; many persons strive for high ideals; and everywhere life is full of heroism.
Be yourself. Especially, do not feign affection.
Neither be cynical about love; for in the face of all aridity and disenchantment it is as perennial as the grass.
Take kindly the counsel of the years, gracefully surrendering the things of youth.
Nurture strength of spirit to shield you in sudden misfortune. But do not distress yourself with dark imaginings.
Many fears are born of fatigue and loneliness. Beyond a wholesome discipline, be gentle with yourself.
You are a child of the universe
, no less than the trees and the stars; you have a right to be here. And whether or not it is clear to you, no doubt the universe is unfolding as it should.
Therefore be at peace with God, whatever you conceive Him to be, and whatever your labors and aspirations, in the noisy confusion of life keep peace with your soul.
With all its sham, drudgery, and broken dreams, it is still a beautiful world.
Be cheerful. Strive to be happy.

For the most part, I think I can agree with what’s said. However, near the end of it, especially the parts where I bolded, something just doesn’t feel right about it. I almost kind of feel like things just aren’t seen in the correct Catholic perspective, I guess. Like this is how a New Ager might perceive things. 🤷
I am with you, Suko. This is very much a New Age attitude, although the movement was not know by that name at that time.
And I really don’t understand those Catholics who seem to have no problem with “God, whatever you conceive Him to be”.
I am sorry, but God is not something you dream up. Either there is God, or you make something up. You can’t have it both ways.
Yahweh said “I am”.
 
I have no problem with the bold parts. All God’s creatures are part of God’s universe. And every one has his unique relationship and experiences with God.
 
Not sure if you are aware, but if u accidentally make a double post, there’s an option to delete it during the 20 minutes of time u have to edit it. 😃
Thanks. My phone’s browser doesn’t always play nice worth the CAF platform, including radio buttons.
 
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