I studied some Latin in high school so I can kind of understand what things mean with the translation nearby . . .
Not so with the old translations.
They’re not literal at all . . .
The new translations actually follow the old text. It’s like the translators thought, “Hmm. Well, this is close enough. I think it basically says the same things as the Latin text. Sounds good to me.”
I can understand, but the majority of the intent of the prayer is the same.
However, if I may post a comparison:
I REALLY don’t think these two say the same thing. I mean, the intent and affect of the words is mostly the same, but if someone told me that both of these were translations of the same text, I wouldn’t believe them. One is a paraphrase.
I would translate this in my halting Latin like this:
I took four years of Latin, but that was over two years ago, and the course was not rigorous. However, using a Latin dictionary and grammar aid I was able to knock this out . . .
In my own unprofessional opinion (kindly do not cite me), the new translation is more accurate to the Latin text.
I removed two words from the latin in my translation and the words I added are in brackets.
- Father is not in the latin text.
- The descriptor “blessed” is removed from passion.
- The word “holy” is removed from people.
- “Servants/slaves” is changed to “ministers”.
- “Heavens” is removed and adjection glorious changed to the place of Christ’s ascension.
- The descriptor “many” is added to “your gifts”.
- The latin says “we offer to your glorious majesty”, not to “you, God of glory and majesty”. The sacrifice is being offered to his majesty.
- Here is the worst offense of all, the poetic states three times, “pure victim, holy victim, immaculate victim”, but the wording is changed, dropping pure and immaculate, and combining them to say “perfect”, and the word “victim” is changed to the less personal “sacrifice”.
- “Holy” is removed from “bread of life”
- “Chalice” is changed to cup.
Those are some differences I noticed. The new translation is superior to mine (as my Latin stinks), but I think mine is a little closer than the old one. . .