There is a book called APOCALYPSE by Abp. Averky (translated and expanded by Fr. Serphim Rose) that is based on the 5th century writer St. Andrew of Crete.
“The Lambs Supper” by Scott Hahn. While it is not a commentary per-se, it is a VERY interesting read that concentrates on Revelations in regards to the Mass.
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