Confirmation & First Communion Invitation Wording Help

[CatholicRoseGrl]

HI Everyone,
Im going to be sending out my e-vites soon like in the next few days. And I don’t know how to word it since im married but yet still young 30ish So far I have this :

Your presence is requested for this very joyful life moment. Please come and be apart of this this special holy scared blessed day.

That’s all I got. I tried to get ideas by searching the web and lookin at other invitations but I keep getting the little kids ones.
Any good suggestions or editing ???

Blessings
Lu

 

[Irishmom2]

Your presence is requested for this very joyful life moment. Please come and be apart of this this special holy scared blessed day.

First of all, depending on the age of the people you are inviting, I would use actual invitations, not e-vites. Older folks prefer paper.

Second, I would just call it what it is, your First Holy Communion and Confirmation into the Catholic Church. “Very joyful life moment” sounds very vague and like you just got a puppy or something.

Third, make sure you proofread what you are going to send. There are typos above in red.

 

[nodito]

“Please join us to celebrate the joyful occasion of Susan Smith’s First Holy Communion and Confirmation on Saturday, June 1st at 2 o’clock in the afternoon at Most Holy Trinity Catholic Church in Holyville, KY. Cake to follow in the church hall.”

You really can’t go wrong as long as people understand from the invitation 1) What they’re being invited to and 2) When/where it is.

Congratulations!

 

[CatholicRoseGrl]

First of all, depending on the age of the people you are inviting, I would use actual invitations, not e-vites. Older folks prefer paper.

Second, I would just call it what it is, your First Holy Communion and Confirmation into the Catholic Church. “Very joyful life moment” sounds very vague and like you just got a puppy or something.

Third, make sure you proofread what you are going to send. There are typos above in red.

First of all its an family and close friends event. Second I DON"T have the time or money to do the old fashion way.
Third I was very tried when I wrote that post! And of course I do reread my stuff plenty of times before sending out anything invitation wise!