Patrick, you are correct to point out the “immediately’s”. The OP’s original comment doesn’t show the fast action of Mark by stating that so many sentences begin with just “And”, IMO. There a ton of “And then’s” that begin sentences. To me, its almost like a kid who is so excited to tell a story, that he can’t get the words out fast enough. “And then we did this… and then we did that… and then we did…”.
Mark’s Gospel is all about action, as there is very little dialog. You have, what, 5 parables? Matthew and Luke have 20 and 21 or so. No long dialogs by Jesus either; no Sermon on the Mount (Matthew) or the Plains (Luke) or the Last Supper Discourse (John).
Correct! Here’s part of the first chapter of Mark for a sample:
Beginning of the good-news of Jesus Christ [son of God], as it is written in Isaiah the prophet:
Behold! I send my messenger before your face,
Who shall make ready your way.
A voice shouting in the wastelands:
“Prepare the way of the Lord,
straight make his paths.”
John the Baptizer appeared in the wasteland, preaching a baptism of repentance to remission of sins, and going out to him were the whole country of Judaea and all the Jerusalemites, and they were being baptized by him in the river Jordan, confessing their sins, and John was clothed with camel’s hair and a belt of leather around his waist, and was eating locusts and honey of the field, and was preaching, saying, “He comes – one mightier than I – after me, of whom I am not worthy, having bent down, to loosen the strap of his sandals! I baptized you with water, but he will baptize you with the Holy Spirit,” and it came to be in those days, Jesus came from Nazaret of the Galilee, and was baptized in the Jordan by John; and immediately coming up from the water, he saw the heavens tearing apart and the Spirit like a dove descending on him; and a voice [came] from the heavens: “You are my son, the beloved! In you I take delight;” and immediately the Spirit drives him out into the wasteland, and he was in the wasteland forty days being tested by Satan and was with the wild animals, and the angels were ministering to him. And after John had been handed over, Jesus came into the Galilee, preaching the good-news of [the kingdom of] God, [and saying] that the time is filled up and the kingdom of God is drawing near – “Repent, and believe in the good-news!” And, walking by the sea of Galilee, he saw Simon and Andrew the brother of Simon, dragnet-casting into the sea (because they were fishers) and Jesus said to them, “Come after me, and I will make you become fishers of men,” and immediately, having left the nets, they followed him, and having gone on a little farther, he saw James of Zebedee and John his brother – and they were in the boat mending the nets – and immediately he called them, and, having left their father Zebedee in the boat with the hirelings, they went off after him, and they go on to Capharnaum; and immediately on the sabbaths, having entered into the synagogue, he was teaching, and they were being awestruck at his teaching because he was teaching them as having authority and not as the scribes, and immediately there was in their synagogue a man with an unclean spirit, and he cried out, saying, “What to us and to you, Jesus the Nazarene? You have come to destroy us! I have known you who you are: the holy one of God,” and Jesus rebuked him, [saying,] “Be muzzled shut, and come out of him;” and the unclean spirit having torn him and having shouted a great voice came out of him, and they were all amazed that they debate among themselves, saying, “What is this? A new teaching! With authority also the unclean spirits he commands and they obey him,” and the fame of him went out immediately everywhere to all the surrounding region of the Galilee.
If that doesn’t exhaust you and make you gasp for breath, I don’t know what will.
