Do you like my poetry?

[Teeliumtrozzle]

I write Christian poems and I need to know if they are good or not so do you like them? You can find them @ pages.matmice.com/home/Christianwebsite_poetry

 

[Teeliumtrozzle]

Oh, and if you dont like them, please tell me why, cos then I can improve them.

 

[blessedstar]

You have a talent! I particularly liked ‘I think of You, my Jesus’.

Thank you for sharing your work.

 

[baltobetsy]

They are very good for someone your age. Continue to study the great poets and try some other forms that are less rhythmic as you mature.

Also, check your spelling, especially in the second poem:
tongue, everyone, sovereign.

All in all, they were very enjoyable.

Betsy

 

[TraditionalCath]

i liked God created everything