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Monica83
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I think oftentimes Father James Martin writings are unclear and incomplete.
From the Merriam Dictionary
NO, it’s not.Definition of weasel word
: a word used in order to evade or retreat from a direct or forthright statement or position
Weasel words are problem with writing. It’s not an attack on the person, only his writing. Weasel words DO call the person’s thesis, and therefore his credibility into question, which is why editors always note them in feedback to the author.
And just so we’re clear, here are examples:
“Many people say that…”, “according to several sources…”, “it is generally accepted that…”, “some say…”
These are weasel words because they are imprecise and lack forthrightness. If you just look carefully at them, they do not paint a negative picture of the author himself, only his writing style. His editor will tell him to tighten his writing by advising him to say, for example, “In a 2008 study, 75% of respondents said…”, “Ninety-five percent of all American Catholics surveyed agreed that…”
If Fr. Martin in any of his writings used such phrases like “many Catholics…” or “some said…” or “many disagree” or something similar, then he used weasel words. The term does not insult the author. It’s either the weasel words were used or they weren’t, and all one has to do is check his writing.
It is NOT an attack, otherwise, editors will be “attacking” their authors all the time.
No tap dancing. Here’s a good discussion on “weasel words”Then you’re tap dancing around the definition given by the Merriam Dictionary.
The person has an agenda of their own which is why they use evasive language from the topic.
Fr Martin did not do this in his article.
Remember this when people tell you that you’re using “weasel words,” in your post.
Jim
Well the writing is fine such as it is, even with its vagueness and the pop psych phrases. I can see why it attracts some.
You can say that again!Well the writing is fine such as it is, even with its vagueness and the pop psych phrases. I can see why it attracts some.
Edward, for the benefit of those who just don’t or won’t understand that you’re not attacking the author, rather than the writing, can you cite the weasel words you came across?I could post two thousand such sentences.
“Certainly this is a superficial conceit: there is much movement on the surface, but the mind is neither deeply moved nor affected.”
It’s riddled with strawman arguments.