Dear Music Leaders,
First, let me thank you all for the hope you’ve given me. Reading this thread off and on for the past few months (heck, maybe a year!) has been a great source of comfort for me. I am now aware that there are pro-active musical shepherds who care about their suffering sheep.
Second, please know that I’m from Los Angeles, California, and all my comments should be viewed with knowledge of that fact. However, I have also attended Mass in Las Vegas, Nevada, and in Oregon and Illinois. I have heard the same music at every Mass, so maybe what I’ve experienced these last 20 years is not a solely LA experience.
Third, I’m a convert. I was baptized at the age of 32 in 1993 (looong after Vatican II), and I have no childhood predispositions or prejudices. My Lutheran Grandmother (Dad was atheist) taught me to sing “I Will Make You Fishers of Men” when I was a kid, and I loved it. That’s the extent of my childhood Christian music exposure (in my teens, my Christian music exposure came from the movie Jesus Christ, Superstar).
Fourth, I became highly active in liturgy (and other parish functions and charities) after my baptism. Besides joining other parish groups, I joined the choir and eventually became a cantor and then, beyond that, was asked by my choir director to write lyrics for special occasions. I have mixed memories of this period (mixed in deciding where my guilt lies), but I am grateful to that choir director for teaching me that singing at Mass was not about performing, but about leading the assembly in sung prayer.
Fifth, consider my sour grapes because my liturgical compositions have been uniformly rejected by every Catholic music authority (other than that first choir director), whether the authority is from my parish or from a Catholic Music Publishing House. I cannot emphasize enough how much I want you to consider the possibility that I’m just a bitter old never-been.
Sixth, my request: I’ve written a song in response to the pope’s proclamation of a Jubilee Year of Mercy. I know there are no musical problems with the song because I wrote it to “Beach Spring” (the melody Marty Haugen used for “God of Day and God of Darkness”). Any problems would be with the lyrics. Please, please, please give me your absolutely honest response to the lyrics (how else can I learn?). Specifics would be greatly appreciated because, so far, all I can get from rejectors is “this isn’t the current direction of Catholic music.”
Thank you in advance for reading and, especially, responding (which I hope some do).
GOD OF MERCY
From the void burst God’s creation: space and time and matter born.
From the dust rose men and women, with whom God His world adorned.
Ever Alpha and Omega, Source of truth and grace and peace,
God of all, God wise and holy formed His people’s hearts as free.
Every age and every nation, every culture, every man
Turned his back on his Creator, turned from God’s most holy plan.
We, all sinners, now implore You, God of mercy, God of love,
Treat us not as we’re deserving; rain forgiveness from above.
God the Father, faithful Teacher, Who instructs and Who restrains,
God the Son, our sweetest Brother, Who bore all our wretched pain,
God the holy Holy Spirit, Who creates our hearts anew,
We, your family, beg you humbly, rain down mercy like the dew.