NAB - Revised Psalms

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Here’s the 22nd Psalm from the Douay-Rheims:
Psa 22:1 Unto the end, for the morning protection, a psalm for David. (22:2) O God my God, look upon me: why hast thou forsaken me? Far from my salvation are the words of my sins.
Psa 22:2 (22:3) O my God, I shall cry by day, and thou wilt not hear: and by night, and it shall not be reputed as folly in me.
Psa 22:3 (22:4) But thou dwellest in the holy place, the praise of Israel.
Psa 22:4 (22:5) In thee have our fathers hoped: they have hoped, and thou hast delivered them.
Psa 22:5 (22:6) They cried to thee, and they were saved: they trusted in thee, and were not confounded.
Psa 22:6 (22:7) But I am a worm, and no man: the reproach of men, and the outcast of the people.
Psa 22:7 (22:8) All they that saw me have laughed me to scorn: they have spoken with the lips, and wagged the head.
Psa 22:8 (22:9) He hoped in the Lord, let him deliver him: let him save him, seeing he delighteth in him.
Psa 22:9 (22:10) For thou art he that hast drawn me out of the womb: my hope from the breasts of my mother.
Psa 22:10 (22:11) I was cast upon thee from the womb. From my mother’s womb thou art my God,
Psa 22:11 (22:12) Depart not from me. For tribulation is very near: for there is none to help me.
Psa 22:12 (22:13) Many calves have surrounded me: fat bulls have besieged me.
Psa 22:13 (22:14) They have opened their mouths against me, as a lion ravening and roaring.
Psa 22:14 (22:15) I am poured out like water; and all my bones are scattered. My heart is become like wax melting in the midst of my bowels.
Psa 22:15 (22:16) My strength is dried up like a potsherd, and my tongue hath cleaved to my jaws: and thou hast brought me down into the dust of death.
Psa 22:16 (22:17) For many dogs have encompassed me: the council of the malignant hath besieged me. They have dug my hands and feet.
Psa 22:17 (22:18) They have numbered all my bones. And they have looked and stared upon me.
Psa 22:18 (22:19) They parted my garments amongst them; and upon my vesture they cast lots.
Psa 22:19 (22:20) But thou, O Lord, remove not thy help to a distance from me; look towards my defence.
Psa 22:20 (22:21) Deliver, O God, my soul from the sword: my only one from the hand of the dog.
Psa 22:21 (22:22) Save me from the lion’s mouth; and my lowness from the horns of the unicorns.
Psa 22:22 (22:23) I will declare thy name to my brethren: in the midst of the church will I praise thee.
Psa 22:23 (22:24) Ye that fear the Lord, praise him: all ye the seed of Jacob, glorify him.
Psa 22:24 (22:25) Let all the seed of Israel fear him: because he hath not slighted nor despised the supplication of the poor man. Neither hath he turned away his face form me: and when I cried to him he heard me.
Psa 22:25 (22:26) With thee is my praise in a great church: I will pay my vows in the sight of them that fear him.
Psa 22:26 (22:27) The poor shall eat and shall be filled: and they shall praise the Lord that seek him: their hearts shall live for ever and ever.
Psa 22:27 (22:28) All the ends of the earth shall remember, and shall be converted to the Lord: And all the kindreds of the Gentiles shall adore in his sight.
Psa 22:28 (22:29) For the kingdom is the Lord’s; and he shall have dominion over the nations.
Psa 22:29 (22:30) All the fat ones of the earth have eaten and have adored: all they that go down to the earth shall fall before him.
Psa 22:30 (22:31) And to him my soul shall live: and my seed shall serve him.
Psa 22:31 (22:32) There shall be declared to the Lord a generation to come: and the heavens shall shew forth his justice to a people that shall be born, which the Lord hath made.
 
You seem to make “drastically affects our understanding” the criteria for rejecting a translation. I** think the Holy See had other concerns in this case; one of which was the use of vertical inclusive language. Horizontal inclusive language applied to humans (which I still find personally egregious) is one thing. Vertical inclusive language applied to God is quite another.** God the Creator is presented to us in Scripture as Father. Jesus called Him Abba, father; and taught us to pray to “our Father.” To neuter the Almighty through the use of inclusive language is wrong not to mention poor translating. The revised NAB psalter is guilty of this. Psalm 111 is an example.
I own a copy of the Second Edition New American Catholic Study Bible. At the front of this study bible is a reading guide, including articles from various people regarding biblical archaeology, Catholic interpretation of the Bible, and one section, authored by Ronald D. Witherup, S.S., Ph.D., concerning “The Challenges of Biblical Translation.” Initially reading his summary of these challenges caused me to be sympathetic to the NAB – as mentioned above (in another post). :o I’ve always been sympathetic when it comes to OT passages, not knowing Hebrew myself but knowing enough to allow that it’s a fairly ridiculous language to translate into English. Anyone who doesn’t cross-reference the LXX is a fool.

Ronald D. Witherup, SS., Ph.D., is Provincial of the U.S. Province of Supicians and former academic professor of Sacred Scripture at St. Patrick’s Seminary in Menlo Park, California. He holds a doctorate in biblical studies from Union Theological Seminary in Richmond, Virginia. That’s the man’s credentials for commenting on the difficulties present in every translation. And here’s what he has to say about “the case of inclusive language”:

He begins by saying,

The NAB, for instance, has taken the stance that moderate attention to horizontal inclusive language is appropriate for a contemporary English translation…because…*Inclusive language means language that includes rather excludes. *

He goes on by saying,

The principle of inclusivity has also been applied to biblical language about God (e.g., vertical inclusive language). Some object to the overabundance of masculine terminology for God in the Bible, although it is an understandable outgrowth of a patriarchal culture. Theologically, since God is a spirit and is neither male nor female, biblical language about God, in fact, has its limitations. As the Catechism of the Catholic Church points out:

God transcends all creatures. We must therefore continually purify our language of everything in it that is limited, image-bound or imperfect, if we are not to confuse our image of God - “the inexpressible, the incomprehensible, the invisible, the ungraspable” - with our human representations. Our human words always fall short of the mystery of God. (CCC 42)

To refer to God as “he” or to call God a rock or a fortress, a sheperd, etc. is to use metaphorical and analogous language to describe how God acts toward people or how we experience God.



Then, beneath his summation on the “characteristics of the NAB translation,” he mentions:

The NAB utilizes modest horizontal inclusive language wherever possible and where it would not distort the text. As much as possible, where the text necessarily requires an inclusive reading, such is rendered in the English translation. The translation does not employ vertical inclusive language.

:eek:

Obviously, the last sentence is misleading since the Psalms, as evidenced, do include vertical inclusive language. So much for sympathy.
 
To refer to God as “he” or to call God a rock or a fortress, a sheperd, etc. is to use metaphorical and analogous language to describe how God acts toward people or how we experience God.
Or, it is simply to use what has always been in English the first person singular pronoun. See: dictionary.reference.com/search?q=he&x=0&y=0 , definition 2.

There is the case where “he” is used to mean a male individual, and then there is the case where “he” is used to mean one human individual. The first case should be left alone. The second case should ALSO be left alone, because using, literally, “he or she” and also using “everyone” along with “his or her” are tedious, and using “they” or “those” loses the singular context.
 
I own a copy of the Second Edition New American Catholic Study Bible. At the front of this study bible is a reading guide, including articles from various people regarding biblical archaeology, Catholic interpretation of the Bible, and one section, authored by Ronald D. Witherup, S.S., Ph.D., concerning “The Challenges of Biblical Translation.” Initially reading his summary of these challenges caused me to be sympathetic to the NAB – as mentioned above (in another post). :o I’ve always been sympathetic when it comes to OT passages, not knowing Hebrew myself but knowing enough to allow that it’s a fairly ridiculous language to translate into English. Anyone who doesn’t cross-reference the LXX is a fool.

Ronald D. Witherup, SS., Ph.D., is Provincial of the U.S. Province of Supicians and former academic professor of Sacred Scripture at St. Patrick’s Seminary in Menlo Park, California. He holds a doctorate in biblical studies from Union Theological Seminary in Richmond, Virginia. That’s the man’s credentials for commenting on the difficulties present in every translation. And here’s what he has to say about “the case of inclusive language”:

He begins by saying,

The NAB, for instance, has taken the stance that moderate attention to horizontal inclusive language is appropriate for a contemporary English translation…because…*Inclusive language means language that includes rather excludes. *

He goes on by saying,

The principle of inclusivity has also been applied to biblical language about God (e.g., vertical inclusive language). Some object to the overabundance of masculine terminology for God in the Bible, although it is an understandable outgrowth of a patriarchal culture. Theologically, since God is a spirit and is neither male nor female, biblical language about God, in fact, has its limitations. As the Catechism of the Catholic Church points out:

God transcends all creatures. We must therefore continually purify our language of everything in it that is limited, image-bound or imperfect, if we are not to confuse our image of God - “the inexpressible, the incomprehensible, the invisible, the ungraspable” - with our human representations. Our human words always fall short of the mystery of God. (CCC 42)

To refer to God as “he” or to call God a rock or a fortress, a sheperd, etc. is to use metaphorical and analogous language to describe how God acts toward people or how we experience God.



Then, beneath his summation on the “characteristics of the NAB translation,” he mentions:

The NAB utilizes modest horizontal inclusive language wherever possible and where it would not distort the text. As much as possible, where the text necessarily requires an inclusive reading, such is rendered in the English translation. The translation does not employ vertical inclusive language.

:eek:

Obviously, the last sentence is misleading since the Psalms, as evidenced, do include vertical inclusive language. So much for sympathy.
Oh, my; there are alarms sounding all over the place here. My sympathies on your being taken in by this “scholar”.
 
Here’s a comparison of the 22nd Psalm. From the NAB:

This Psalm is full of inclusive language in the NAB, even though it clearly is quoted by Jesus during His passion.

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And to think that some are amazed that the Vatican posts all the books of the NAB (1970 OT, 1986 NT) except for the Psalms on its web site. It’s a real shame the Vatican didn’t demand the USCCB either post the 1970 Psalms or take the rest of the NAB off as well.

I have a friend, a former co-worker now retired and living in Florida, who insists that inclusive language is dead. Sure it is. :rolleyes:
 
Then, beneath his summation on the “characteristics of the NAB translation,” he mentions:

The NAB utilizes modest horizontal inclusive language wherever possible and where it would not distort the text. As much as possible, where the text necessarily requires an inclusive reading, such is rendered in the English translation. The translation does not employ vertical inclusive language.

:eek:

Obviously, the last sentence is misleading since the Psalms, as evidenced, do include vertical inclusive language. So much for sympathy.
Well, if your bible contains the revised Psalms of 1991, then his statement is in contradiction with the NAB’s own footnote in this case.
 
This may only partially answer your question, but, where the earlier NAB Psalms used masculine singular “man”, the revised psalter has used the plural. The main problem with this is that a particular instance, now interpreted as applicable to all of mankind, er, humanity 😃 , tends to obscure any reference to Christ the Man.

That’s speciesist 😃 - say instead “perthingkind”. “Personkind” is boyist, which is not allowed. (I wonder whether feminists studying Russian history object to reading about boyars)​

E.g., Ps. 1:1 “Blessed is the man who walks not in the counsel of the wicked”, as opposed to “Blessed are they…”

I’m sure other posters can contribute more examples.
Psalm 32 - “Blessed is the man whose sins are forgiven…” is now “Blessed are those whose…”. This sort of thing is a very bad idea, because it substitutes vagueness for precision & inaccuracy for accuracy - in addition to which, it blurs the Christological application of the Psalms; which is in some ways the most serious loss of all. The “man” of Psalm 1 is above all, because in the fullest sense, Christ Himself - pluralising the noun loses this reference. 😦
 

That’s speciesist 😃 - say instead “perthingkind”. “Personkind” is boyist, which is not allowed. (I wonder whether feminists studying Russian history object to reading about boyars) Psalm 32 - “Blessed is the man whose sins are forgiven…” is now “Blessed are those whose…”. This sort of thing is a very bad idea, because it substitutes vagueness for precision & inaccuracy for accuracy - in addition to which, it blurs the Christological application of the Psalms; which is in some ways the most serious loss of all. The “man” of Psalm 1 is above all, because in the fullest sense, Christ Himself - pluralising the noun loses this reference. 😦

Careful about Psalm 32(31); the D-R reads thus:

1 Blessed are they whose iniquities are forgiven, and whose sins are covered. 2 Blessed is the man to whom the Lord hath not imputed sin, and in whose spirit there is no guile.

The RSV, however, does agree with what you indicate:

1 Blessed is he whose transgression is forgiven, whose sin is covered.
2 Blessed is the man to whom the LORD imputes no iniquity, and in whose spirit there is no deceit.

For Psalm 1, however, only weenie translations changed “man” to something else.
 
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