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For what it’s worth, I agree. The English language is basically a Germanic tongue with a lot of influence from the Norman French ( remember William of Normandy aka “the conqueror”).Yes, but the traditional English translation is also very literal!
Pater noster qui es in caelis sanctificetur nomen tuum adveniat regnum tuum… is exactly translated by “Our Father who art in heaven, hallowed be thy name. Thy kingdom come …” The roots in the English version up to this point are Germanic, as they ought to be! They form part of the basic vocabulary of English.
There is no innovation of meaning in the English version whatsoever. Art in the first line is an archaic form of “to be” precisely translating es in the Latin. Hallowed be (also archaic nowadays) exactly translates sanctificetur, and so on.
As English speakers, we can’t give up our Germanic roots just for the sake of sounding more like Latin, can we? As long as the meaning is preserved, I can’t see why you object to the English version - except merely as a matter of personal preference in that you like words with Latin roots better because they more resemble the prototype. Am I mistaken?
The word “art” in English is the second person singular of the the verb “to be” and while it may be unused colloquially, it’s still in the dictionary. The word “hallowed” is also interesting: it is similarly “archaic” but with a twist: the usage comes up every year on Halloween aka “All Hallows Eve”, i.e., the eve of All Saints.
When translating from the Latin, it seems to me that the more classical usage of the recipient language should be used. If nothing else, it would help to instill a sense of reverence in translated liturgical texts which I find lacking in what the ICEL has previously foisted upon the English speaking world.