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I told my neighbor the new translation was supposed to be more accurate from the original. She asked (angrily) “why wasn’t it done right the first time”. What can I say? Thanks for any answers.
 
Glory to Jesus Christ!

I told my neighbor the new translation was supposed to be more accurate from the original. She asked (angrily) “why wasn’t it done right the first time”. What can I say? Thanks for any answers.
you can go to the bishop’s website usccb.org, on the link to Roman Missal, and look for the articles and bulletin inserts that answer the commonly asked questions, including this one. The short answer is that the version just replaced was translated in a dynamic equivalence mode, attempting to translate thought for thought rather than word for word, and with an agenda of making it “user friendly” in modern English usage. The new translation was done with an agenda of adherence to the literal meaning of the words in the Latin original, which means they are also closer to the literal meaning of the scriptures from which the prayers of the Mass are drawn.
 
I told my neighbor the new translation was supposed to be more accurate from the original. She asked (angrily) “why wasn’t it done right the first time”. What can I say? Thanks for any answers.
It all depends on what one means by “more accurate.” The older translation was based on, as previously noted, the notion of dynamic equivalence. They translated what the Latin meant/conveyed and put it into “regular” English. The new translation translates essentially literally and uses more Latin grammar than English grammar. Try putting the new translation into Microsoft Word and you’ll get a whole lot of green underlining, lol.

Outside of a few real bad flubs (i.e. “for all” instead of “for many”) the older translation wasn’t nearly as bad as its made out to be. However, the Church prefers a more formal translation rather than a generic one…
 
Thanks. I think the Church preferring a “more formal” one now will work for her. 🙂
 
Translation is often as much art as anything else. Different syntax, word meanings (sometimes a nuanced difference, sometimes additional differences), idiomatic phrases, changes due to antiquity, jargon (i.e., language peculiar to a particular area, e.g., theology - “consubstantial” coming to mind), interpretive overlays, simplicity or complexity of meaning or structure, the goal of the translation, the audience for the translation, etc., all are intersecting and all have their points.

So, were the former translations “wrong?” No, but other considerations clearly have led to the changes we see. Is the new translation “better?” Depends on the factors above and what weight you deem appropriate to give to each.

I find the new translation preferable - as apparently does HMC. The new translation does adhere more closely to a direct translation of the Latin. That has pluses and minuses. I certainly prefer “consubstantial” as that is the traditional translation of “homoousia” which was soooo fought over at Nicea. IMHO for historic and precision purposes, it is much better than “one in being.” (I note, it is a “big” word, which should be used as an opportunity for catechesis as well as a history lesson. Others would claim that the Mass is not the place to use such a word. Reasonable people can disagree on that.) HMC has clearly changed Her mind on the issue.

Actually, I think the opposition is really all driven by politics. The wild experiment and manhandling of the Mass of the post-conciliar period is over. I believe, that’s what this represents to the opponents - and they don’t like it.
 
Actually, I think the opposition is really all driven by politics. The wild experiment and manhandling of the Mass of the post-conciliar period is over. I believe, that’s what this represents to the opponents - and they don’t like it.
I would agree with most of what you say but I doubt if this is “over.” English (as other modern languages) changes its meanings often. 2011 English is different than 1911 English (or even 1961 English) and words are understood differently. The various handmissals had some differences, though probably not that noticeable at those times since most didn’t actually respond in English prior to Vatican II. They only read them, big difference. Also, look at all the English Bibles out there, each one claiming to be the most accurate translation. And many of the Bible translations never made it to publishing. Some even make a claim they are better than the originals. How can that be?
 
We were in a hurry and it seemed a good idea at the time. With the benefit of hindsight, the language used sounds a bit like a 1960s insurance prospectus written for the badly educated.
 
We were in a hurry and it seemed a good idea at the time. With the benefit of hindsight, the language used sounds a bit like a 1960s insurance prospectus written for the badly educated.
Prudential life? :D:D
 
We were in a hurry and it seemed a good idea at the time. With the benefit of hindsight, the language used sounds a bit like a 1960s insurance prospectus written for the badly educated.
As I understand it, the American English re-translation has the most changes. It was explained to me that in the 60’s it was “simplified” for the (dumb) Americans.
 
As I understand it, the American English re-translation has the most changes. It was explained to me that in the 60’s it was “simplified” for the (dumb) Americans.
The only dumb ones are the ones who thought “simplifying” it was a good idea.
 
As I understand it, the American English re-translation has the most changes. It was explained to me that in the 60’s it was “simplified” for the (dumb) Americans.
I was under the (factual) assumption that at that time, and up until the early 90s or so, American public schools were the best in the world. So to say that it was because of “dumb” Americans is an extension of a stereotype that is true today, but was not back then, and I think it is unfair.

Rather, I think it probably happened to the English translation, because even more than now, the English speaking world in the 60s was the “center of the world,” so to speak, and the disestablishment culture was rooted in that part of the world, and so rather than Americans’ perceived dumbness at the time, I think that the disestablishment culture was the cause for our poor translation.

Vatican II had the tragic misfortune of happening at an exceedingly poor time in history, and I think that this caused, at least in part–a very large part, I should think–much of what we blame on Vatican II. Much of the destruction of the liturgy and Catholic identity that ensued can be blamed not on Vatican II itself or its intrinsic nature, but on our reaction to it, whether that be our interpretation of it or our egotistical hyper-glorification (and consequently our skewed expectation and application) of it. Vatican II can certainly be viewed as conducive to tradition. In fact, I think its most healthy interpretation is in this light. However, the majority took too many liberties and we had self-avowed “theologians” and “liturgists” who decided to have their way with the Church and her beliefs and practices, which landed us in the predicament we are in today with the new translation and the “reform of the reform,” which are both quite necessary and welcome, in my opinion.
 
We were in a hurry and it seemed a good idea at the time. With the benefit of hindsight, the language used sounds a bit like a 1960s insurance prospectus written for the badly educated.
🙂
 
As I understand it, the American English re-translation has the most changes. It was explained to me that in the 60’s it was “simplified” for the (dumb) Americans.
Any vernacular would have been “simplifying” it for anyone not Latin-scholared, wouldn’t it?
 
In trying to recapp some of what my pastor said in his homily which included comments from Fr. Robert Barron- olsos.hspheredns.com/player.php?type=homily&year=2011&file=20111127_1st+sunday+advent±+cycle+b.mp3

Liturgical Prayer is a matter of addressing Almighty God…It is like speech appearing at the court of a king- The type of language to address a President in a formal letter.

Translation of the 1960’s translated with certain cultural tendencies of that time. It was blunt, clear, direct, casual, and unadorned. But it developed a predjudice against language that was “fussy” or “over ornamental”. What this came to give us was a certaining flattening out of the language of the liturgy, a rendering pedestrian what ought to be elevated.

New Translation- Our hearts and minds are going to be elevated toward the Lord and towards heavenly realities. But the first thing we need to do is to be silent and have some silence in our hearts so that we can listen.
 
I would agree with most of what you say but I doubt if this is “over.” English (as other modern languages) changes its meanings often. 2011 English is different than 1911 English (or even 1961 English) and words are understood differently. The various handmissals had some differences, though probably not that noticeable at those times since most didn’t actually respond in English prior to Vatican II. They only read them, big difference. Also, look at all the English Bibles out there, each one claiming to be the most accurate translation. And many of the Bible translations never made it to publishing. Some even make a claim they are better than the originals. How can that be?
I agree it’s certainly not “over” if the issue were translation. As you rightly point out language changes. That, of course, was one of the great reasons to use Latin: it was dead (no native or day-to-day speakers) so its meaning was fixed.

However, I think the issue is politics and the end (or ending) of official manhandling of the Mass that was so popular post-VII. HMC is bringing the Mass back under control; those who hate it are leaving a la Protestantism in the 16th century. Read the National Catholic Reporter to get a flavor of it: that rag sounds/reads more like a Protestant apologetic paper, even to the point of strenuously claiming it’s “catholic” just as much as Catholicism - but it obviously is not.
 
Glory to Jesus Christ!

I told my neighbor the new translation was supposed to be more accurate from the original. She asked (angrily) “why wasn’t it done right the first time”. What can I say? Thanks for any answers.
Because the people doing the original translation didn’t like what it said. That’s basically it.
 
However, I think the issue is politics and the end (or ending) of official manhandling of the Mass that was so popular post-VII.
It could very well be politics. But it could also be concern that using any of the old translations such as those in handmissals and those which the CoE uses might infringe on copyrights. And what are copyrights good for, 27 years, 37 years? Any coincidence? I think we discussed this on another thread a little while back.
 
I was under the (factual) assumption that at that time, and up until the early 90s or so, American public schools were the best in the world. So to say that it was because of “dumb” Americans is an extension of a stereotype that is true today, but was not back then, and I think it is unfair.
As a child who attended school through the 70s and 80s and met many foreign students, our schools were never that good - especially in the South.
Rather, I think it probably happened to the English translation, because even more than now, the English speaking world in the 60s was the “center of the world,” so to speak, and the disestablishment culture was rooted in that part of the world, and so rather than Americans’ perceived dumbness at the time, I think that the disestablishment culture was the cause for our poor translation.
No, the American translation had many more changes than the English and Irish. I attended a lecture by a priest that worked on all of this for the USCCB.
 
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