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I remember a long time ago, I found a website that mentioned Saint Thomas More’s writings having a lot of cuss words in it. I can’t find anything of that topic right now.
Was Les Miserables immoral because it portrayed theft, suicide, and other things? Was Shakespeare evil for portraying murder? Was Crime and Punishment evil because it portrayed murder? How about the Devil by Tolstoy for portraying lust?Is It acceptable to, while writing a piece of fiction, have a character in it curse in the sense of obscene language? What if it’s portrayed positivly namely one character telling another one to “P*** off” (I hope I can do that.) as a victorious moment, given that the character receiving clearly deserves it.
Indeed, but they are not you.Writers, please consider your words because they will be attributed to you even though your characters are fictional.
Agreed; very good point.Bad people do things that they shouldn’t do. If you’re going to write realistic fiction, then it will include bad people, and to keep it realistic, you will have to show them doing things they shouldn’t do. One of those things is using scatalogical language, and as long as you aren’t gratuitively dropping f-bombs, etc., into the dialog, I don’t see a problem. Take you cues from the Old Testament. It has rapes, murders, fornication, and all kinds of bad stuff in it, but the writers didn’t include it just to be including it, and they didn’t go into the kind of detail that you see in modern American secular fiction.
Yes, but that may be the point of the writer in shaping his or her character i.e. that the character does not have a good education or strong grasp of English or is just plain crude.My take on swearing (in real life, writing, television, etc.) is this: Look at how many words are in the dictionaries of the world. So many to choose from. Swearing makes a person (to me) look as if they don’t have a strong enough grasp of the English (or any other) language to be able to find a more appropriate word!![]()
Excellent point, Ed. While I don’t read a lot of fiction (except for maybe historical fiction with Bernard Cornwells Sharpe series, who managed to write the entire series about some pretty low characters without dropping a single F-bomb), I do see this is a LOT of period piece movies. I’ve never heard so many F-bombs; methinks the use of the F word was not anywhere near as common a couple hundred years ago as it is today.Definitely not. As a writer myself, I avoid all such language, And as someone who works in the media, I’m noticing it appearing in historical books as of late. In other words, attempts are being made to normalize profanity.
In the past, I enjoyed reading just about anything, but, in one case, I had to throw one book out because the author added sexual references that ruined the book for me. I wrote to the publisher of another book to complain about certain words and phrases. To my surprise, I got an e-mail from the author offering the lame “well, that’s how me and my friends talk.” I could’ve replied by saying, “You are writing this book for the general public, not you and your friends.” But I just threw the book out.
As an editor of fiction, if I see a manuscript with profanity in it, I take out my yellow highlighter and mark every word. My recommendation is the substitution or deletion of such words.
Peace,
Ed
Dear TheRealJuliane,Be different! There are hundreds if not thousands of very profane novels on the shelves right now. In fact it is difficult to find even one that doesn’t have the “F Bomb” in the pages many times! Many people are so desensitized to bad language that they no longer even notice! Try to find a way to have the characters express themselves WITHOUT using cuss words!
If you have a rough character or two, where it is in their nature to curse, try to redeem them somehow by the end of the work. Let them come into contact with a more honorable person and have that character influence them for the better. By the end of your piece, maybe the rough character will have made lots of changes including learning to speak without cursing.
The great writers of the past did not need to use coarse language to create their characters. It takes more skill to create 3-dimensional characters instead of just a stereotype. Work at keeping things clean! Aim for the highest level, not the gutter!
Try Aimee and David Thurlo’s Sister Agatha mystery series. Her Ella Clah series is good as well, but there are a few instances of language (very few) and a lot of Native American mysticism.Foul language is what is used when peoploe run out of intelligent things to say.
Three days ago I was reading a book by Tammi Hoag. I got tired of the swearing and took a two hour break. Went back to page 23 and the third sentence had a swear word. Tossed the book.
I vowed that if I ever read another book by Vince Flynn I will total the number of times he uses the F word.
Agatha Christie, Alistair McQueen, John Steinbeck, Mary Higgins Clark can all write books without swear words, descriptions of how intelligent, brave and athletic the hero is. Also with pages describing the fantastic figure of the heroine. But they had writing telent.
Others need to swear in lieu of talent.
Since I do read a lot I am looking for authors I have no previous experience with (I am not into romance novels). I have recently experimented with J A Jance, Alex Berenson and Jeffrey Archer to be clean.
There are writers who writer for Catholic publishing houses but they are few and their books can run to $30 which is too pricey for me.
Surely you can understand the benefit of posting succinctly and with clear diction and sequence of argument. I hope that you choose to change your posting style in accordance with this goal. An excellent resource is The Elements of Style by Strunk and White.Messages should be short. Do not post lengthy replies (including replies that consist largely of quotes from an earlier message).
Revised post: 423 wordsChristian authors must dare to be different and not follow the current culture in its customary use of profanity. This will require a firm resolution to avoid that which is unworthy of God and which makes its appeal to the lowest common denominator. Sadly, the number of contemporary authors using profane and indecent language is considerable and evinces most plainly the moral and cultural deterioration of our age. As you quite rightly observe, the classic writers of times-past did not need to resort to unsavoury language or ribald expressions, which highlights our moral bankruptcy today. The older fiction was mostly distinguished by the absence of obscenity, in contrast to the permissive revolution of the 1960’s. Since that time things have just deteriorated as men have continually sought to push the envelope just that little bit further, always giving specious explanations for so doing. A good plot line with colourful characters does not need to be spiced up with liberal quantities of swear-words or explicit content, unless, of course, an author is using the latter to compensate for a want of literary ingenuity and talent. Many of today’s writers of fiction appear to have no command of the English language and their diction leaves a lot to be desired. However, the reading public have become increasingly less discriminating and relish a poor diet of inferior fiction, which is also morally unhealthy.
Our Lord, said: “I tell you, on the day of judgment men will render account for every careless word they utter (or write); for by your words you will be justified, and by your words you will be condemned” (S. Matt. 12: 36,37, parenthetical words mine). The words that we speak or write are an indication of the state of our hearts, (q.v. see S. Matt, 12: 34-35 - “For out of the abundance of the heart the mouth speaks”, or writes as the case may be). Words for authors of fiction to ponder very carefully indeed. There can never be any place for profanity or salacious material in a book penned by anyone who names the name of Christ, for that is hardly a good example to non-Christians. “Conduct yourselves wisely toward outsiders, making the most of the time. Let your speech be always gracious, seasoned with salt…” (Col. 4: 6). Nothing unsavoury should proceed from our lips or from our pen, and if we are writers (even of fiction) then we should always commend the faith we profess by writing novels that will inspire the Christian virtues, one way or another.
The use of profanity in a work of fiction is fundamentally different from the use of profanity in the real world; one is an author actually using an expletive, the other is an expletive on a page which no one has actually said.Christian authors, dear sister, who profess the holy religion of Christ must dare to be different and not follow the godless multitude in their customary use of profanity.
Swearing has not been demonstrated to belong exclusively to the “lowest common denominator” unless one defines the LCD as “those who swear,” in which case the statement is tautological and therefore useless.This will require rectitude but also a firm resolution to avoid that which is decidedly unworthy of God and which makes its appeal to the lowest common denominator.
Every age has its moral struggles; we have improved in some ways since the 1950s and degenerated in other ways.is very considerable and evinces most plainly the moral and cultural deterioration of our age.
Nor do the authors now; not every use of bad language is a last resort.As you quite rightly observe, the classic writers of times-past did not need to resort to unsavoury language or ribald expressions
Again, it does not follow: you have in no way demonstrated that the reason for using swear words is to mask a lack of ingenuity and talent.A jolly good plot line with colourful characters does not need spicing up with liberal quantities of swear-words or explicit content, unless, of course, an author is using these to compensate for a want of literary ingenuity and talent.
Dan Simmons, George R.R. Martin, Steven Erikson, Neal Stephenson, etc. all seem to me to have an excellent command of our language. Perhaps you would encounter better others if you were not so close-minded about what literature is acceptable.Many of today’s writers of fiction appear to have no command of the English language and their diction leaves a lot to be desired, jolly sad if you ask me.
That does not follow. The author is not actually speaking, nor is he uttering any words. He is putting words in the mouth of another. This is a fundamental distinction that separates the uneducated and weak-minded and those who are capable of appreciating the work of God in all its forms and the ability of mankind to rejoice in the creative talent with which our Creator has endowed us.There can never be any place for profanity or salacious material in a book penned by a anyone who names the name of Christ, for that is hardly a good example to non-Christians, who quite rightly expect a much higher standard from those who profess godliness.
“One way or another” can include unsavory things used to a particular purpose in the novel.Nothing unsavoury should proceed from our lips or from our pen, and if we are writers (even of fiction) then we should always commend the faith we profess by writing novels that will inspire the Christian virtues, one way or another.
That is nice, but irrelevant. I fail to see why something required for the human race to perpetuate itself should be banned from public mention in every case.The words “sex” and “pregnant” could not be used.
That does not follow. “Censorship” does not mean that one does not believe that nothing is wrong, but rather that individuals should in this particular context be allowed to do something wrong. This should be familiar to us all; it is the societal analog of free will. Whether the society should allow that free will is a separate issue.People use the word “censorship” today as a bad thing. Weren’t Catholic children taught certain words were wrong to say and certain things were wrong to see?
What does that mean, concretely? An exhaustive definition is necessary, for this one is too vague.it may not find itself in continual conflict with Christian morality or even with simple human morality based upon the natural law.
What does this mean? It is not difficult to reason that the portrayal of sin induces thoughts of the importance of virtue in the minds of the consumers.The essential purpose of art, its raison d’être, is to assist in the perfection of the moral personality, which is man, and for this reason it must itself be moral.
The author, obviously. For composing a work of fiction. No statement in the work of fiction can actually be attributed to the author as a statement by virtue of the nature of fiction.If an author receives an award for his book, who does it go to? A fictional character? That is not logical or rational
Dear Joe,I don’t know if I’d go so far as to say it is intrinsically immoral to even once use coarse language in composing a work of fiction, but I find it pretty much unnecessary and very distracting. For many centuries, many writers more brilliant than any of us managed to write villainous characters with depth without ever dropping f-bombs. Why should it now seem that it is impossible to do so?
Obscene language has always seemed like a rhetorical short-cut to me.We want to convey “saltiness” and “reality” with words that also pack an emotional punch. The reader and the writer would be better served if the writer instead chose to hone his skills and conveyed those same sentiments in other more meaningful ways.
That is only a dodge. Catholics are to put all our thoughts in obedience to Christ. When we put such words in the mind of any reader, are we helping or hindering?The author, obviously. For composing a work of fiction. No statement in the work of fiction can actually be attributed to the author as a statement by virtue of the nature of fiction.
For example, an author writes a novel in which a character swears in anger. Would we say that the author swore in anger? Obviously not; that is absurd.
That is, the author writes a swear word, but does not himself swear.
You have not explained why the distinction between fictional characters saying fictional things and real persons saying real things should be ignored.Profanity, dear friend, is always profanity and thus I think that your dichotomy between the world of fiction and the real world is false.
Your discussion admits the difference between fiction and reality; you too observe this dichotomy, you simply happen to believe that incidents falling on both sides are problematic.Whilst the expletive is said in a fictious setting it still, nonetheless, sets the whole tone and sentiment of a book and that tone renders the work culturally unhealthy and necessarily lowers its quality and character.
I am sure that is the reaction of all non-believers, none of whom use profanity and all of whom share Catholic ideals.Moreover, if an author professes the holy religion of Christ, then his use of swear words is hardly a good witness to non-believers and they will be surely shocked and surprised that a Christian writer will stoop to the level of using such profanity, even in fictional context.
This is not true; the Roman aristocrats and poets did not shy away from swearing. It was considered out of place in particular genres, but it was not held as a taboo in a moral sense.The use of bad language has always been considered uncouth and having no place in polite society.
Perhaps you have never been exposed to the cultured society, but swearing has never been restricted to anger. Although fictional, the Merovingian in the Matrix Reloaded hardly can be considered unrefined, and yet notes the aesthetic and auditory beauty of French swear words.It tends to be associated with those who are unrefined and who habitually express their anger by cursing and swearing.
Unless you proclaim yourself to be the omnipotent God, then you know you are incapable of determining the mental justifications of thousands of persons.Authors who routinely use profanity are simply pandering to this coarseness and vulgarity because it boosts the sales of their books.
Raising the tone in literature, if one defines this as the production of high art, does not mean the elimination of all swearing necessarily. I agree that there are instances in which it is gratuitous and unnecessary, but this can hardly be exhaustive.A Christian author, of all people, should be doing the very opposite and making every effort to raise the tone in literature. That is providing a good witness and a Christian counter-culture that will help raise a lowered public opinion that desperately needs to be raised.
Indeed; at least literature today is intellectually stimulating and addresses moral and ethical concerns, versus the insipid and mentally dead TV and movies of fifty years ago. Certainly a product of the times.If proof were required of this you only have to compare a novel, film or tv series of the 1950’s and even 1960’s with a novel, film or tv series of today. The contrast will be very marked indeed and will evince most clearly our very sad plight.
I agree.If a man professes godliness, then that does necessarily make him “close-minded” as to what is acceptable as regards the arts and literature.