Please critique my works

[cceerpp]

Hello there,
I would please like you to check out some of my Apologetics works and give your critiques. Thanks a lot.

(1) An article entitled:
To bow or not to bow that is the question: A response to critics of Catholic worship.
Source:
cceerpp.webs.com/to-bow-or-not-to-bow.html

(2) An article entitled:
Preserving the priceless precious private parts: A response to immodest dressing.
Source:
cceerpp.webs.com/preserving-priceless-precious-parts.html

(3) An Apologetics Reference guide.
Source:
cceerpp.webs.com/catholic_apologetics_guide_101.pdf

Your brother in Africa,
Delali
www.delali.co.nr

 

[FCEGM]

Hello there,
I would please like you to check out some of my Apologetics works and give your critiques. Thanks a lot.

(1) An article entitled:
To bow or not to bow that is the question: A response to critics of Catholic worship.
Source:
cceerpp.webs.com/to-bow-or-not-to-bow.html

(2) An article entitled:
Preserving the priceless precious private parts: A response to immodest dressing.
Source:
cceerpp.webs.com/preserving-priceless-precious-parts.html

(3) An Apologetics Reference guide.
Source:
cceerpp.webs.com/catholic_apologetics_guide_101.pdf

Your brother in Africa,
Delali
www.delali.co.nr

Delali, these are very good. Also, the manner in which you’ve created the site has made the articles very easy to read.

Your sister in North Carolina,
Frances

 

[Ted_in_Charlott]

I personally found them a little difficult to follow. I think a little basic composition would help the reader.

From a critical point of view, it would be comforting to know what your sources are in relationship to the RCC. Maybe quote CC #s. If you are making a hypothesis , so state in your opening paragraph. Build your case with evidence, then use your conclusion to back it up.

Theologically, 2 has a slant I have never heard, about the leaves verses the animal skin. I have always heard that the killing of the animal was a precursor to the perfect sacrifice of Jesus and that is what “covers”. I think to read the concept of the the leaves being inadequate seems a stretch.

Finally, thank you for your devotion to the RCC and her outreach.