Sanctus, Sanctus Sanctus

  • Thread starter Thread starter Hugh_Beaumont
  • Start date Start date
Status
Not open for further replies.
Hymns have to be paraphrased since the poetic nature of the hymn requires a translation that still has a rhythm. I wouldn’t be too bothered by it, that seems overly scrupulous to me.
But that’s just the point. Hymns do not have to be translated. That was the whole idea behind Jubilate Deo. The English, if you follow along, is just a guide with no guarantee it’s a perfect translation. And a Latin-English side-by-side is of little value if all you’re going to do is to sing the English.

As far as accepted translation or an imprimatur goes, they just says basically that there are no doctrinal errors.
 
Hymns have to be paraphrased since the poetic nature of the hymn requires a translation that still has a rhythm. I wouldn’t be too bothered by it, that seems overly scrupulous to me.
But that’s just the point. Hymns do not have to be translated. That was the whole idea behind Jubilate Deo. The English, if you follow along, is just a guide with no guarantee it’s a perfect translation. So why bother with the meter, rhyme, alliteration, etc. if everyone will eventually find some fault with the translation? Sooner or later, a Latin scholar (or even a first year Latin student) is sure to come by, discredit the entire song, and upset the entire Anglosphere world. Just saying.
 
Hymns have to be paraphrased since the poetic nature of the hymn requires a translation that still has a rhythm. I wouldn’t be too bothered by it, that seems overly scrupulous to me.
I agree. I’ve been recently reminding my children that one great beauty of the mass is that our standardization allows us to join with other parishes celebrating mass simultaneously and communally raising of voices in praise to Our Father. What a great privilege to be counted among those hundreds of thousands of voices of the faithful lifted to the Heavenly feast in unison. Holding ourselves apart from the worship bears no good fruit. When we decide not to participate (regardless of our reason) voices are missing.
 
This is one of my husband’s problems with Latin hymns that are occasionally used in the OF of the Mass. The translations printed alongside the Latin are not correct.

It’s not just a comma. It’s blatant mis-translation. I took some Latin in school, and my husband has a minor in linguistics and is very well-informed about etymology of words. It’s obvious that the Latin hymns in our missallettes have translations that are “paraphrases,” not translations.

This bothers both of us.
So you’re saying that there is some value in studying Latin, enough at least to know that a particular translation fails? Cool.
 
But that’s just the point. Hymns do not have to be translated. That was the whole idea behind Jubilate Deo. The English, if you follow along, is just a guide with no guarantee it’s a perfect translation. So why bother with the meter, rhyme, alliteration, etc. if everyone will eventually find some fault with the translation? Sooner or later, a Latin scholar (or even a first year Latin student) is sure to come by, discredit the entire song, and upset the entire Anglosphere world. Just saying.
👍

Bitter experience confirms to me that so-called “translations” of hymns, particularly metrical hymns, aren’t worth the paper they’re printed on. I say that not only because the “translation” may be inaccurate, but because the “translation” may well be of the 1970’s-variety of ICEL-style “dynamic equivalence” or another sort of watered-down paraphrase. Any of those often result in the meaning of the actual text, as it was in the original language, to become very much obscured.
 
Next project - How about going back to the original for the Domine non sum dignus?
“Speak but the word and my soul shall be healed.” That, “but only” is just so drab.
I know this isn’t the main topic of the thread, but doesn’t “sed tantum” literally mean “but only”? Why would we change that?
 
This is one of my husband’s problems with Latin hymns that are occasionally used in the OF of the Mass. The translations printed alongside the Latin are not correct.

It’s not just a comma. It’s blatant mis-translation. I took some Latin in school, and my husband has a minor in linguistics and is very well-informed about etymology of words. It’s obvious that the Latin hymns in our missallettes have translations that are “paraphrases,” not translations.

This bothers both of us.

I used to sing the English words softly whenever Latin hymns were sung because I don’t like singing words that I don’t understand, but now, I don’t sing at all. Many times, Catholics on CAF point out that those of us who don’t like Latin can follow along with the English translation . But not if it’s incorrect!

So I just stand there and try to think about Jesus. And I don’t attend the weekly benedictions in our parish. This situation with the paraphrases bothers me that much. I don’t know why the publishers don’t simply print an exact translation instead of a paraphase. Or print the exact translation so we know what the Latin means, AND print the paraphrase so we can sing along (sometimes exact translations don’t fit the music).

I think one reason this bothers me is because it causes me to doubt the accuracy of ANY of the “translations” of ancient Catholic documents and writings into English . Apparently, even though Latin is unchanging, the translations DO change over time, and I’m not sure what to trust. This is disturbing to me after my very bad experiences in the Protestant church (my family was kicked out of our Evangelical Protestant church) with sola Scriptura. Just being honest here, people. 😦
Wow. I can usually at least understand and sympathize with your viewpoints, but I don’t know this time…

I think you’re honestly just being over the top on this one… not attending benediction because 4 strophes are not translated as perfectly as they could be. Seriously? For pete’s sake, just memorize a good translation, or even print off your own. really…

Or, if it bothers you that much, why not just not sing and meditate on the Mass? Always works for me when the choir is singing, or when I can’t sing for whatever reason. Real active internal participation.
 
Wow. I can usually at least understand and sympathize with your viewpoints, but I don’t know this time…

I think you’re honestly just being over the top on this one… not attending benediction because 4 strophes are not translated as perfectly as they could be. Seriously? For pete’s sake, just memorize a good translation, or even print off your own. really…

Or, if it bothers you that much, why not just not sing and meditate on the Mass? Always works for me when the choir is singing, or when I can’t sing for whatever reason. Real active internal participation.
We don’t do any Latin during our Masses. So there’s no issue there.

Since the parish has 24/7 Adoration, I am able to adore the Lord Jesus in the Blessed Sacrament at any time. So I don’t feel that I am missing anything by not attending the Benedictions. There are usually several people in the Adoration Chapel, so I am not missing out on corporate adoration of the Lord Jesus. Why attend a Benediction that I find upsetting when I can attend Adoration and be at peace?

My point is–is Latin really valuable to the lay Catholic if the translations are not accurate? THIS is what bothers me about this situation! I recognize that Latin is the Official Language of the Church, but I’m really truly wondering about its value for the layperson. The clergy study it in school, and the bishops use it in communicating, and have the knowledge of the language to understand and resolve translation issues. But we laypeople do not have all this (although some do).

What I’m feeling here is that perhaps we should not become so caught up in and enamored of “Latin” Catholicism, but instead, stick with our own languages which we hopefully understand. I honestly don’t see the point of listening to a foreign language and then reading a doubtful translation or a paraphrase. Seems counterproductive and possibly even a little dangerous to our catechesis.
 
My point is–is Latin really valuable to the lay Catholic if the translations are not accurate?
Are completely accurate translations really possible? I don’t think so. Even in English there are subtle differences between synonyms, but if translated into a different language these two synonyms (assume and presume, for example) become the same word in some foreign tongue. Much therefore is lost in the translation when phrases, sentences, entire paragraphs lose their nuances. Can’t our faith be distorted in the English, a language which is shared by Christians and non-Christians alike, similarly?
 
My point is–is Latin really valuable to the lay Catholic if the translations are not accurate? THIS is what bothers me about this situation!
What makes you think they’re not accurate translations because they’re partially paraphrased? In some ways, dynamic equivalence makes for a better translation than absurd literalness for various reasons. Hymns aren’t documents of canon law. Every single word does not have to convey the exact meaning was conveyed in the Latin; actually, that would be impossible, because every translation in some part is a betrayal of the original.

For example, a Latin dictionary will tell you that “Sacramentum” means “Sacrament”. This is true. But the Latin word “Sacramentum” also means “sacred oath”, which the Latin Church Fathers utilized frequently for word play in their theological writings. (Words used by the Romans were frequently used by Christians to parallel them in a different sense. “Pax” was used by the Romans to denote peace by total military domination of the Empire, whereas by Christians to denote the blessing of Christ’s domination over sin. So the military oath sworn by Roman soldiers, the Sacramentum, was paralleled with the sacred bond that Christians had with Christ in the Sacraments of the Church.)

That sense will never be conveyed in English, it either has to be translated as “Sacrament” when literally referring to the Holy Sacraments of the Church, or as “oath” when used in its poetic sense. So ultimately no translation suffices to give you all of the senses of the original text, you either gotta be able to read that yourself, or you have to accept that if the word “Sacramentum” is translated as “oath” in a hymn, it’s not because it’s a bad translation or paraphrase, but really because all translations will never give you perfect exactness of the original.

I would suggest reading some books on translation theory. As I said, absurd literalness is not necessarily the most accurate way to translate something.
 
We don’t do any Latin during our Masses. So there’s no issue there.
How unfortunate.
My point is–is Latin really valuable to the lay Catholic if the translations are not accurate?
Of course it is. Sacrosanctum Concilium stressed the importance of latin remaining the language of worship, at least in part. It did not say the congregation must have translations.
 
What makes you think they’re not accurate translations because they’re partially paraphrased? In some ways, dynamic equivalence makes for a better translation than absurd literalness for various reasons. Hymns aren’t documents of canon law. Every single word does not have to convey the exact meaning was conveyed in the Latin; actually, that would be impossible, because every translation in some part is a betrayal of the original.

For example, a Latin dictionary will tell you that “Sacramentum” means “Sacrament”. This is true. But the Latin word “Sacramentum” also means “sacred oath”, which the Latin Church Fathers utilized frequently for word play in their theological writings. (Words used by the Romans were frequently used by Christians to parallel them in a different sense. “Pax” was used by the Romans to denote peace by total military domination of the Empire, whereas by Christians to denote the blessing of Christ’s domination over sin. So the military oath sworn by Roman soldiers, the Sacramentum, was paralleled with the sacred bond that Christians had with Christ in the Sacraments of the Church.)

That sense will never be conveyed in English, it either has to be translated as “Sacrament” when literally referring to the Holy Sacraments of the Church, or as “oath” when used in its poetic sense. So ultimately no translation suffices to give you all of the senses of the original text, you either gotta be able to read that yourself, or you have to accept that if the word “Sacramentum” is translated as “oath” in a hymn, it’s not because it’s a bad translation or paraphrase, but really because all translations will never give you perfect exactness of the original.

I would suggest reading some books on translation theory. As I said, absurd literalness is not necessarily the most accurate way to translate something.
this.
 
The problem exists in Latin too. I Believe the triple adjective is this most ubiquitous form of the superlative in many language though not necessarily in Latin. (Holy, holier, holiest). yet I think the rhetorical function here is Vocative, - vocative, - adjective and it is therefore justified linking the third “holy” to Lord.
Except that neither “Sanctus” nor “Dominus” is in the vocative; they are in the nominative. I suppose a Hebrew scholar could tell us what Isaiah 6:3 actually says, but in the Vulgate it is rendered: “sanctus sanctus sanctus Dominus exercituum plena est omnis terra gloria eius.” That makes sense – the whole thing is in the third person, up through: “full of his glory.” The Sanctus in the Mass, by contrast, contains an ungainly and puzzling shift from the nominative to the second person with “gloria tua”; roughly, “The Lord is holy; the earth is full of your glory.” Beg pardon?, he must say – You talkin’ to me?
 
As I said, absurd literalness is not necessarily the most accurate way to translate something.
I agree with you on a lot of points. Literalness (as in the last translation) means/meant using a cognate as much as possible. For example, “spirit” for spiritu, “consubstantial” for consubstantialem, etc. But going back to the OP, is “holy” an accurate translation for sanctus? Seems to be an educated guess at best IMO, but not necessarily “wrong.”

OTOH it can work to your advantage as a translator. For example, in one of the Vatican II documents haud raro, literally “not rarely” has been translated as “frequently.” This seems to change the landscape a lot, in that it encourages more than just states a fact. So should the translator be setting the tone?
 
I know this isn’t the main topic of the thread, but doesn’t “sed tantum” literally mean “but only”? Why would we change that?
Yes, I would have to agree. But when the Mass was originally translated in “the vernacular”, (and this lasted many years - maybe 20), we said, “Speak but the word and my soul shall be healed.”

The new translation sounds awkward to me. Perhaps it should be “But say only the word…”, rather than “But only say the word…”
 
Yes, I would have to agree. But when the Mass was originally translated in “the vernacular”, (and this lasted many years - maybe 20), we said, “Speak but the word and my soul shall be healed.”

The new translation sounds awkward to me. Perhaps it should be “But say only the word…”, rather than “But only say the word…”
It might be even more awkward if we translated sed tantum dic verbo more precisely as “but only say WITH the word” as verbo is in the ablative case, not accusative as it’s rendered in both old and new translations.
 
My 1961 Roman Missal has:
Sanctus, Sanctus, Sanctus, Dominus, etc, and
Holy, holy, holy, Lord, etc

As someone else has pointed out, this version corresponds with the verse in Isaiah. As the wording in the Mass is deliberately taken from Scripture, I would say that the correct thing to do is to put in the comma as it appears in Scripture. I also think that that’s the way it should be said now when the Mass is in the Ordinary Form.
 
My 1961 Roman Missal has:
Sanctus, Sanctus, Sanctus, Dominus, etc, and
Holy, holy, holy, Lord, etc

As someone else has pointed out, this version corresponds with the verse in Isaiah. As the wording in the Mass is deliberately taken from Scripture, I would say that the correct thing to do is to put in the comma as it appears in Scripture. I also think that that’s the way it should be said now when the Mass is in the Ordinary Form.
Can’t check a 1961 Missale at the moment, but there’s no comma in the 1962 or 1920 editions. I’m assuming nobody here is going to argue that a pause became liturgical tradition due to a textual difference that existed for one year.

The English translation of the Isaiah verse is totally irrelevant because the priest is celebrating from the Missale, not from the Bible (especially not an English translation of the Bible, if we’re talking about 1962 or the Extraordinary Form). If anything you should consult the Clementine Vulgate in which there is no comma.

Nobody has yet to explain to me why a comma necessarily implies a pause; one would think there should only be a pause if it’s written as such in the chant.
 
The website Sancta Missa has the complete text of the 1962 Roman Missal.
sanctamissa.org/en/resources/books-1962/missale-romanum-1962.pdf
This does not have a comma between the third ‘Sanctus’ and ‘Lord’.
However, they also have an online tutorial for saying the Mass and, in this version, there is a comma between the third ‘Sanctus’ and ‘Lord’.
sanctamissa.org/en/tutorial/ordo-missae-3.html
I wonder if the inclusion/omission of that comma in the text we examine depends on the publisher/printer rather than any official source, although clearly the official source must have one or the other.
It does seem strange that the 1961 Missal seems to have a comma and the 1962 Missal seems not to have a comma. I wonder what the reason for that can be.
 
Status
Not open for further replies.
Back
Top