Scriptural Meditation

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I don’t know if this is the right thread to post in but I wrote a meditation which is on my blog. I’m quite keen to get feedback from Catholics about it so I can improve my meditation on scripture. I’ve taken the Ignatian approach of imagining myself into a biblical event, in this instance the post-resurrection appearance of our Lord by the Lake of Galilee. I’m posting an extract here to get your ideas about it-

Climbing over the hills the sun began to gentle the landscape teasing delicate tints and hues, hints of colour, out of the austere shadowland where they had been asleep. The sea once more began to assume her living aspect as she responded ardently to the fingers of sunlight softly brushing across her undulating surface. With nothing but tiredness and aches to show for a long nights toil the Apostles would have sat in their dawn brightened boat reflecting wryly perhaps on the recent words their Master had spoken to them apart from me you can do nothing The beauty of watching day break across that Syrian Sea and their own beloved land perhaps provided some compensation for their strains and pains. It is of no moment just how often you have seen new day manifesting itself by land and sea. Each time seen it has a quality that entrances and kindles hope in even the most cynical and world weary; amongst whose numbers the seven Apostles could never be counted. It may be that for a time they became wholly absorbed in watching the first dancing, sparkling encounters between cheerful sun and restless wave. If so they would have been oblivious to the man rising out of the shorelines shadows, leaving a small fire he had been tending and walking to where water and land were exchanging age old pleasantries.

Have you caught anything, friends?
His voice effortlessly crossed the distance separating them. The same voice that had once been heard with ease by thousand upon thousands of eager pilgrims. Had the seven known who it was that spoke with them then they would have considered it a fulfilment of David’s prophetic words The voice of the Lord is heard over the waters.
“No” they chorused back to him.
Cast to the right of the boat, and you will have a catch
Others might have wondered who this stranger was to give them orders. Not the Apostles though, not even John the Theologian. Led by the indefatigable Peter they immediately went into action. In doing so they justified the words their Master had once uttered-
Believe me, unless you become like little children again, you shall not enter the kingdom of heaven
How like children as yet unspoiled by the world it was to leap full tilt into deeds without thought or murmur simply because a stranger has asked them to. Even after they had recently seen of betrayal, abandonment, torture and death the seven were still the happy possessors of a guilelessness, an essential belief in the goodness of men, leading them on to trust and accept them. What a dreadful and truly evil thing it is to abuse such trustfulness freely offered by the innocent and childlike. One who does so walks thereafter in the shadow of the gates of Hell unless they should repent seeking forgiveness, reconciliation and conversion.

And now the net which had remained dispiritingly empty all night was overwhelmingly, unmanageably full. To the swift apprehensions of love that could mean only one thing. It is the Lord breathed His beloved disciple. At that, pausing only to clothe his nakedness, Peter plunged into the sea. His burning longing to be by the side of his Master unable to contemplate the possibility of even a moments delay. In his account of the event John the Theologian has, in a few brief words, clearly sketched out the profound differences between the contemplative and the active ways of attaining the fullness of the presence of Jesus the Christ. The beloved disciple, however busy he might be with the practical things of the everyday world, is always in the inmost chamber of his heart deeply immersed in loving remembrance off and communion with his sweet, divine, Lord. So it is that he is always the the first to discern by inspired intuition the Masters presence whether in the flesh, as here by the Syrian Sea, or in the spirit. Having discerned Him what follows? He is content simply to gaze adoringly upon Him. In the simple exchange of loving glances between Master and beloved disciple all that needs to be said and done is said and done through silence and non-action. By contrast Peter is first and foremost the man of action, he gets things done. Sometimes perhaps it happens that he is so busied with doing things that he lets the ‘why’ of his actions fade in importance before the ‘what’ and the ‘how’. His love for his Master, however, is so great that the merest whisper of the name of the Lord will bring about an instant change of direction and no obstacle on earth, or out of it, can keep him from plunging into the action of union and reunion.

This episode recalls another earlier one involving Simon before he was Peter and some of the Apostles before they were called Apostles. They were all fishing and on the advice of Jesus let down their nets. They caught so many fish that they began to break.The net represents the Old Covenant and the Apostles prior to their calling by Jesus its adherents. The net broke and they were unable to cope with the catch because the old Law and righteousness by adherence to it were unable to meet the desire of God to save all the races and peoples of the world from the ruinous consequences of sin. Everything was transformed by the salvific death and resurrection of our Lord and Saviour Jesus Christ. The net described by John represents this Good News about Jesus. In the hands of the Apostles, the men chosen by Christ as leaders and ministers of His Church it is now the a net which is strong enough to contain every nation and tribe and tongue and people
 
I think this is an excellent start and should turn into a very nice project.

In my opinion, and only my opinion, there are a few things I would change or do differently.

First, I’d try to maybe incorporate quotes or ideas from Church fathers. I know this is your meditation, but I think it helps to know that a particular meditation is thoroughly grounded in Catholic theology and spirituality. I’m not saying to just block quote stuff from the Fathers because that gets boring, but just some quotes from them and well known Catholic theologians can help give your thoughts a little more weight.

I would cut back on some of the descriptive language. In some places it seems overly flowery. A few well-placed and chosen words can go a lot further than a hundred words. That’s just me though and if you get enough positive comments for the language then go ahead and leave it.

ChadS
 
First, I’d try to maybe incorporate quotes or ideas from Church fathers. I know this is your meditation, but I think it helps to know that a particular meditation is thoroughly grounded in Catholic theology and spirituality. I’m not saying to just block quote stuff from the Fathers because that gets boring, but just some quotes from them and well known Catholic theologians can help give your thoughts a little more weight.

I would cut back on some of the descriptive language. In some places it seems overly flowery. A few well-placed and chosen words can go a lot further than a hundred words. That’s just me though and if you get enough positive comments for the language then go ahead and leave it.

ChadS
Thanks for the comments. The descriptive language is pat of the project of entering the scene imaginatively. If its done right it can be a bridge into the scene, if its done badly then its a barrier. Usually, I agree, less is more but that’s what came out that day. Most of my scriptural understandings are based on the Fathers commentaries and their influence can be seen in what I have written how to highlight that as a fact is an issue though. Footnotes would be distracting and direct quotes might break the flow but finding a way to point readers to proper spiritual meditations would be good. I will think more about your suggestions, thanks again for the (name removed by moderator)ut.
 
Thanks for the comments. The descriptive language is pat of the project of entering the scene imaginatively. If its done right it can be a bridge into the scene, if its done badly then its a barrier. Usually, I agree, less is more but that’s what came out that day. Most of my scriptural understandings are based on the Fathers commentaries and their influence can be seen in what I have written how to highlight that as a fact is an issue though. Footnotes would be distracting and direct quotes might break the flow but finding a way to point readers to proper spiritual meditations would be good. I will think more about your suggestions, thanks again for the (name removed by moderator)ut.
Perhaps a further reading list at the end or a suggested reading list. I agree footnotes would make it seem to academic and could turn people away. If direct quotes aren’t the style of meditation you are looking for then it would disrupt your flow also.

ChadS
 
Perhaps a further reading list at the end or a suggested reading list. I agree footnotes would make it seem to academic and could turn people away. If direct quotes aren’t the style of meditation you are looking for then it would disrupt your flow also.

ChadS
Reading list. What an excellent idea. Yes that would make sense wouldn’t it. Thank you very much.
 
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