Hi Eucharisted,
If you are interested, I’ll share some points that might benefit from clarification.
The accidents of the bread and wine are the same, but their substances change . . .
There could be a some confusion as to what the word “their” refers to in the above sentence. If “their” refers to the bread and wine, it is correct to say that their substances change. But if “their” refers to the accidents of the bread and wine, then it is incorrect to say that their substances change. Why? Because the accidents of bread and wine don’t have any substances in which they inhere after transubstantiation.
substances change into the Divine Substance, that is, they become the Precious Body and Blood of our Lord, Jesus Christ.
I’m not sure you would want to say that the substances of bread and wine change into the “Divine Substance”. The phrase “Divine Substance” has a technical meaning.
The Divine Substance, so called, does not include the idea of Christ’s human nature,
per se, so it seems strange to say “Divine Substance, that is. . .the body and blood. . .”
Secondly, the Divine Substance doesn’t have proper accidents. But Christ, in the Eucharist,
does have his own accidents.
You may be trying to convey the idea that the sacrament contains Christ’s divine nature. But Christ’s divine nature is not present by virtue of the sacrament or by transubstantiation. Rather, Christ’s divinity is present by virtue of the hypostatic union, whereby the divine nature is united to Christ’s human nature.
transforming them into the God-Man, Jesus Christ.
Which brings me to the above. It would be more accurate to avoid the word “transform” because that says the opposite of “transubstantiation”, as “transform” literally means “change forms”. But The sacrament arises not from a change of
form, but rather a change of substance. I would use the word “changing” in place of “transforming”.
Finally, that phrase above implies, again, that the change is from bread and wine into Christ. But that doesn’t seem precise enough, really. The Church teaches that the substance of bread* changes*, by virtue of the sacrament, into the substance of Christ’s body
only. Similarly, the wine changes, by virtue of the sacrament, into the blood of Christ.
Christ’s soul is present, not by virtue of the change, but by virtue of concomitance, the natural connection between his body, blood, and soul (this is same reason his blood is present with his body). Christ’s divinity is present by virtue of the hypostatic union.
Well, what do you think? I’m sorry if I mangled your paragraph, or got too deep into it. I just thought you might like to take another look at it.
VC