Not that I don’t believe you, because the prayer seems legit, but could you cite the document or speech?
Ok, not too much problem up to this point. Nothing blatantly heretical.
In the Bible, the mother, rather than the wife, of a king was proclaimed the queen. Catholics also associate the woman from Revelation with Mary, further confirming this title. Again, no problem. (Remember this later on, when we talk about her throne…)
This is praising the faith and holiness of Mary. She as often seen as a “new Eve”, accepting the instructions of God without question where Eve had rejected God’s instructions.
Conqueress is used in an earthly sense here, as she is the vessel by which Jesus was born, and as such made up for Eve’s rejection of God in many ways (although she did not redeem us as Jesus did). As the only human besides Jesus to be born free from sin, she is the perfect person to inspire us not to sin (to instill horror, so to speak)
We now enter the intercessionary portion of our prayer here…
Ok, this one sentence seems to be the heart of the problem, and it does require a bit of explanation. “YOUR throne” refers to the fact that Mary is Queen of Heaven, and thus a queen has a throne. In the Middle Ages, just because a prince or queen had a throne did not make them co-ruler with a king. “YOUR altar” refers to the fact that altars may be dedicated to saints. Many Catholic Churches have side-altars which are devoted the the celebration of specific saints. This doesn’t mean that we’re worshiping them. It’s no different than naming a church after a saint. If I go to St. Paul’s Catholic Church, I’m not going there to worship St. Paul! Likewise, there may be statues and paintings of Mary or a saint to commemorate that person’s actions (think “hall of fame” rather than worship), but we’re not worshiping them in the way that we worship God. The Mass that takes place on the altar is still dedicated to GOD. The decor is simply one of revering a saint.
Catholic Churches were originally designed with many stained glass windows, paintings, and statues back when Rome had collapsed and less than 1% of the population could read. These visual aids allowed the priest to use them as visual instruction tools to teach the faithful, which had no other way to learn about the Bible. Saints were included among these so that parishoners could learn about the stories and actions of the greatest people the church has ever produced, so that they would have wonderful examples of role models to emulate. (Again, the hall of fame reference.)
No problem here. She is the glory, joy, and honor of our people (the human race)! Think hall of fame again! She honored the human race with her actions as one of the greatest people in history, and we rightly thank her for it. (Just as we honor veterans for their service.)
This is your opinion, and everything presented above can be defended from the Catholic perspective.