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dixieagle
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As an English major who’s done her share of close literary criticism…thank you for this!!!Let me defend this sentence by Merton a little bit. Let’s start with the actual sentence:
You asked “What’s dangerous about October?” Merton answers that question in the rest of the passage-“you are are full of ambition…It is a wonderful time to begin anything at all”. October is both fine and dangerous for that very reason; ambition is both fine and dangerous, for it can produce both good and bad. You’re right, that particular phrase is meaningless…unless you take it in the context of the passage, where “ambition” and “October” are intertwined.
Next, you say that the choice of crimson is meaningless…but it isn’t. There is a significant difference between crimson and red. Bricks are red, but I’ve never seen a crimson brick. Banners, though-they can be crimson. Finishing with crimson helps build up to the point about ambition.
Finally, we differ on the idea that October is not a season for “shaking off lassitudes”; have you ever breathed in the crisp October air? Walked outside on a chilly October morning and wanted to do something? And that “shaking off lassitudes” is different than the shaking off lassitudes that comes in the spring. Merton, I assume, wrote this particular passage in Kentucky, where the late summer heat is particularly oppressive. August is a time of lazing about, especially in the dog days of summer in the south, but when the heat fades and the chill comes in…then its time to get serious.
There’s real content to that passage, and I’m sure it goes further; its just a snippet out of the book, but it sure is an evocative snippet. It does require thought, though.