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This point needs to be resolved. We cannot have a rational discussion about punishment if we don’t agree on what it is meant to accomplish.The primary objective of punishment isn’t being addressed.
How about this? I have a good friend who for five or six years was the editor of a national magazine. I sent the sentence from the USCCB to her for review. This is her response.I’ve given an authoritative source on correct grammar. You have not.
In the Chicago Manual of Style , the entry at 6.58 explains the use of semicolons in a complex series: “When items in a series themselves contain internal punctuation, separating the items with semicolons can aid clarity.” The AP Stylebook indicates their use thus: “Use semicolons to separate elements of a series when the items in the series are long or when individual segments contain material that also must be set off by commas.” (Chicago and AP are the two most common style rulebooks used in publishing today.)
Each item between semicolons, then, should be seen as a separate entry in that definition – to simplify, the “several purposes” of punishment are “redressing,” “defending,” “deterring,” and “promoting.” The semicolons are being used here because the last item in that list – “promoting” – itself has multiple aims: “reform, repentance, and conversion of those who commit evil acts.” The words “reform, repentance, and conversion” apply to “promoting”; the words “redressing,” “defending,” “deterring,” and “promoting” refer to the “several purposes of punishment.”
Regarding “i.e.”: “I.e.” is an abbreviation of the Latin “id est,” translated “that is” (a handy way to think of it is " i n e ssence"); as opposed to “e.g.,” – “exempli gratia,” meaning “for example” (where what comes after the e.g. might be a partial list, but not every instance). The “i.e.” here refers only to “redressing the disorder” – “just retribution” is the “essence” of “redressing the disorder.” Because of the semicolon following it, it does not apply to the rest of the sentence.
Reading this sentence is like using the order of operations in mathematics: Everything after the colon is the definition of the whole (the several purposes of punishment). Everything between semicolons is a distinct example in that that particular series (redressing, defending, deterring, and promoting).