Mind if I critique a bit? I would prefer that you consider the tournaments themselves as not really of the religious nature. They’re merely neutral sports. If we’re going to have these Artifacts serve some higher cause, I’d rather people use them to be just what they transform into: Heroes.
I think I just answered the first one. Evil demons want you to use the Artifacts for well… evil so to combat that, we obviously need to spread a message that they oughta be used for good (or at least, not evil). Christianity would of course be one major religion in support of the proper use of Artifacts.
Your critique has revised the story. I love it.
Ok, your people have spread the message about the wonders of Artifacts, teaching people how they can transform themselves, and they are curb-stomping the fallen’s plans in the process.
The Fallen: *“No one wants to use the artifacts for evil, I just tolled this one guy if he turn himself invisible, he could sneak into a woman room. And he said that the artifacts are to precious to be used like that, especially to do sin”! “Everyone knows that doing such things are forbidden! How can we convince them to use these artifacts more sinfully” *
They try numerous strategies, one of which almost worked but failed because it was too obvious. It was an attempt at directly telling them there was a more interesting way to use the artifacts. But most of the humans knew right away it was deception and turn it away.
Now another plan (one of millions of schemes)
The Fallen: “We need to ease them into the idea of misusing the artifacts, it may take centuries, but it’s our only shot at convincing them to do this sin.”
We can use their own media to do it!!!
So they do everything from: afflicting a few teachers, a few world leaders, and a lot of trend setters become afflicted with these poisonous ideas about the artifacts.
Now a few subliminal messages in ads, books, broadcasting, and movies.
The only problem, is it is till too obvious to many followers of the Originator. And they get busted every time.
The Fallen: “We need to aim at a more impressionable generation, people that are still quite maluable”.
“But sir, we can’t just going telling them to do evil. We must conceal it somehow”!
*We must invade imagination, we need to entertain the what if and teach the humans through theoretical.
Give them a imaginative place where misuse of artifacts can be good.
This inception can’t be obvious, let’s hide it in just a few movies, and books. And no matter what, don’t let it parallel too closely to reality, it must be fictionalized so no one will see the threat, nevertheless still using the term artifact
But what would be misuse of artifacts in reality, would merely be acts of good our fiction. This way, no one can compare it to the real world because of the differences.*
This was not the main plot of the Fallen, but it was definitely good one.
—How will this secret plot be exposed?
—How will the Originator handle this?
sorry that took so long
