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I have that book (I have all the books on this subjectWhat’s your understanding, by the way, of why Darwin didn’t mention the Creator in the first edition of Origin, and put it into the second edition?
You have a significant edge on this point. The point I was making was remembered from a comment by Gerald Schroder in his The Science of God. Have just gone through my science books and can’t find it. Must have loaned it out and didn’t get it back. In any case, Schroder is quite emphatic that the phrase had been suppressed in later editions since Darwin’s death. It’s possible my memory is faulty … unless you have a copy of Schroder’s book and you can find the passage by the index. If I find the book later I’ll try to resurrect my point. You might also look under Dawkins in the index, just out of curiosity.

Schroeder:
OK, so that’s the relevant passage from Schroeder. Looking at the text of the various editions, though, it’s clear Schroeder is simply mistaken, unaware for the text of the first edition. Here is the text of that section from the first edition (see here for pictures of a real copy of that first edition’s page):The reference to the “fixed law of gavity” reflects Darwin’s belief that his theory of evolution would suffer a similar fate as Newton’s Laws of planetary motion. At first it would be attacked as sacrilegious. But eventually it would seem to fall within the religious paradigm.
It would, but with no thanks to Gould and his misquote. Here is how Darwin, not Gould, closes The Origin of Species (including the sixth edition, 1872, the last edition of Darwin’s life): “There is a grandeur in this view of life, with its several powers, having been originally breathed by the Creator into a few forms into one; and that, whilst this planet has gone cycling on according to the fixed law of gravity, from so simple a beginning endless forms most beautiful have been, and are being, evolved.”
To accomplish this ruse with no hint to the reader, Gould put a period after “life” and capitalized “Whilst”, neatly leaving out any hint of God. It seems that Gould has a problem with Darwin as well as with God. Although Gould stats “Charles Darwin my hero and role model”[34], he is desperate to change Darwin’s worldview into Gould’s.
DarwinFirstEdition:
I do not have the essays by Gould published in *Natural History *magazine that Schroeder quotes from on page 34, but you can see for yourself that assuming Schroeder’s quote is correct (letter for letter), then all Gould has done is left out a section of the opening sentence and replaced it with an ellipsis. In other words Gould gave this representation:There is a grandeur in this view of life, with its several powers, having been originally breathed by the Creator into a few forms into one; and that, whilst this planet has gone cycling on according to the fixed law of gravity, from so simple a beginning endless forms most beautiful have been, and are being, evolved."
Which is this in the first edition:There is a grandeur in this view of life… Whilst this planet has gone cycling
(bold text indicates what got left out by Gould)There is a grandeur in this view of life**, with its several powers, having been originally breathed into a few forms into one; and that, **whilst this planet has gone cycling on according to the fixed law of gravity, from so simple a beginning endless forms most beautiful have been, and are being, evolved.
and this in subsequent editions:
(bold text indicates what got left out by Gould)There is a grandeur in this view of life**, with its several powers, having been originally breathed by the Creator into a few forms into one; and that, **whilst this planet has gone cycling on according to the fixed law of gravity, from so simple a beginning endless forms most beautiful have been, and are being, evolved.
Schroeder only has a possible point if Schroeder has some knowledge of what edition of *Origins *Gould was quoting from. If Gould was quoting the first edition of Origin, there was no “Creator” reference to leave out.
It’s odd, and a bit telling, I think that Schroeder makes a mistake like this, or commits his own deception, in making such a technical, nitpicky point against Gould. On Darwin’s original text, Schroeder’s point completely collapses.
-Touchstone