Petergee, in the spirit of fraternal charity, I have tried to address your statements in a respectful and professional manner. I would be most appreciative if you were to respond in kind.
It is not respectful to tell someone who disagrees with you that you are “enlightening” him. I believe I responded in kind to you. “Professional”? I was not aware that posting to a web forum has now become a “profession”.
No one is twisting the Holy Father’s words. He is very clear in what he has written. The hymn in question is, indeed doctrinally and theologically deficient.
(a) He does not say anything like “hymns which are doctrinally and theologically deficient are forbidden (or even discouraged)”. And (b) “doctrinally and theologically deficient”, whatever that means, seems to be a phrase which you, not the Holy Father, invented.
It is more about “us” than about God. It celebrates what “we” do
No, it urges us to do what
“we are called to” do. Big difference. I’m sorry but I’ve examined the words carefully many times and I can’t detect a hint of the self-congratulation and self-celebration which you seem to think is so obvious.
rather than what He has done for us. No mention is made of the Sacrifice of Jesus;
Hmmm, I wonder Who it is talking about in the part you (no doubt quite accidentally) omitted:
“
You will lead and we shall follow,
you will be the breath of life;
living water,
we are thirsting for
your light.
5. We will live and sing **your **praises”
the composer reduces the Mass to a mere meal.
Nonsense. “Mere” is **your **word. All that the hymn, on the contrary, says about the meal is that “we are called to break the bread, the Bread of Life and the cup of promise, in this meal we all are one.” Just as the New Testament says. I’m very sorry to hear you have a problem with that.
Furthermore, before we can go out and save the world, as this hymn implies in the second verse, we need to ground ourselves in the Holy Sacrifice of the Mass. The first commandment is to love God. We love God by worshipping Him and adoring Him in the Mass, the Church’s prayer par excellence. Furthermore, the coming of the Kingdom of God is not dependent on our dying and our rising (this particular phrase is nebulous).
So your point is that they’ve got the verses in the wrong order? In that case sing verse 2 at the end if it makes you happy. I’m sure God doesn’t mind if we first remind ourselves to heal the broken, give hope to the poor, and feed the hungry,
and then remind ourselves why we have to do those things. Or vice versa.
Your reference to Ave Maria is not germaine to the discussion, as there is no comparison.
Because…?
Furthermore, Schubert takes this song directly, word for word, from the Hail Mary, which is a prayer of the Church whose first part comes from Sacred Scripture. The prayer is part of our Church’s heritage.
And the parts of this hymn which you object to also come directly from Sacred Scripture, as I mentioned.
The bottom line is that this song emphasizes “the community” more than the Lord.
The Catechism, the Scriptures, and the Mass, all spend more time talking about us and what
we must do and getting
us oriented in the right direction. That in no way means that they are saying that we are more important than God.

You don’t apply this idea to these things, so don’t apply it to this hymn.
It also reduces the Mass to merely a meal. That is the Protestant viewpoint because it does not recognize the Sacrificial element of the Mass. That is where the heart of the problem lies.
Again, “reduce” and “merely” are your words, not the hymn’s*. Not explicitly mentioning* something is not the same as
not recognizing it. If someone gave a short speech introducing me, and omitted to mention my wife, I wouldn’t accuse him of denying that I am married.