The American version of the breviar is horrible. Bad wording/phrasing and those awful Psalm-Prayers. Ugh!
The Psalm-prayers, first of all, are optional. And no, they’re not that bad, they are only in a more conversational type of vernacular.
Yes, the Collects are not a literal translation of the Latin, but they are a fair approximation according to the principles laid out at the time (as per Comme le Prevoit).
But ultimately, this is the APPROVED version of the Divine Office in English for the United States and Canada, and therefore is the gift of the Church to us. I look forward to the retranslation, but in the meantime, I will let the authority of the Church take precedence, and will not let my own preferences rob me of the joy of prayer.
If you pray the “horrible” American version, you are praying the Divine Office. If you pray the beautiful English translation of the Baronius breviary, you are NOT praying the Divine Office, but only devotional prayer based on it.