You’re welcome! BTW, for another link, this is
a translation of Tobit (NETS - New English Translation of the Septuagint) which has the texts of Greek I and Greek II arranged side-by-side. (I forgot to mention that there is a third Greek version of Tobit - Greek III - found in two manuscripts and is described as being a sort of intermediate version between GI and GII, but basically related to the latter. Of this version only Tobit 6:19-12:22 survives.)
Also, when Haydock speaks of verses 12-19 being omitted from the Greek or Hebrew (i.e. the medieval versions), it refers to this narrative comment found only in Jerome’s paraphrase:
Now this trial the Lord, therefore, permitted to happen to him, that an example might be given to posterity of his patience, as also of holy Job. For, whereas, he had always feared God from his infancy, and kept his commandments; he repined not against God, because the evil of blindness had befallen him, but continued immoveable in the fear of God, giving thanks to God all the days of his life.
For as the kings insulted over holy Job, so his relations and kinsmen mocked at his life, saying: Where is thy hope, for which thou gavest alms, and buriedst the dead? But Tobias rebuked them, saying: Speak not so: for we are the children of saints, and look for that life which God will give to those that never change their faith from him.
The main difference between GI and GII, if I might add, is that GI is a more condensed, smoothed out version of the story: it basically ‘fixes’ the Semitic narrative form and language of GII into more streamlined Greek prose. An extreme example can be found in 5:10, where the writer of GI reduces the narrative and the dialogue of GII into eight words (in Greek):
Greek II (NETS): Then Tobias went out and called him and said to him, “Young man, your father is calling you.” So he went in to him, and Tobith greeted him first. And he said to him, “Many joyful greetings to you!” But in reply Tobith said to him, “What is there for me still to be joyful about? Now I am a man with no power in my eyes, and I do not see the light of heaven, but I lie in darkness like the dead who no longer look at the night. Living, I am among the dead. I hear the voice of people, but I do not see them.” So he said to him, “Take courage; the time is near for God to heal you; take courage.” Then Tobith said to him, “Tobias my son wishes to go into Media. Can you go along with him and lead him? And I will give you your wages, brother.” And he said to him, “I can go with him; indeed, I know all the roads. Also I went into Media many times, and I crossed all its plains, and I know its mountains and all its roads.”
(NAB) Tobiah went out to summon him, saying, “Young man, my father is calling for you.” When Raphael entered the house, Tobit greeted him first. He replied, “Joyful greetings to you!” Tobit answered, “What joy is left for me? Here I am, a blind man who cannot see the light of heaven, but must remain in darkness, like the dead who no longer see the light! Though alive, I am among the dead. I can hear people’s voices, but I do not see them.” The young man said, “Take courage! God’s healing is near; so take courage!” Tobit then said: “My son Tobiah wants to go to Media. Can you go with him to show him the way? I will pay you your wages, brother.” He answered: “Yes, I will go with him, and I know all the routes. I have often traveled to Media and crossed all its plains so I know well the mountains and all its roads.”
Greek I (NETS): Then he called him, and he went in, and they greeted each other.
(RSV-CE) So Tobi′as invited him in; he entered and they greeted each other.