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Here’s the Collect for Pentecost Sunday under three different translations:
ORIGINAL LATIN
Deus, qui sacramento festivitatis hodiernae universam Ecclesiam tuam in omni gente et natione sanctificas, in totam mundi latitudinem Spiritus Sancti dona defunde, et, quod inter ipsa evangelicae praedicationis exordia operata est divina dignatio, nunc quoque per credentium corda perfunde.
CORRECTED TRANSLATION
O God, who by the mystery of today’s great feast sanctify your whole Church in every people and nation, pour out, we pray, the gifts of the Holy Spirit across the face of the earth and, with the divine grace that was at work when the Gospel was first proclaimed, fill now once more the hearts of believers.
ORIGINAL ICEL TRANSLATION
God our Father, let the Spirit you sent on your Church to begin the teaching of the gospel continue to work in the world through the hearts of all who believe.
Which of these two ICEL translations is more faithful to the original Latin? Which more deeply expresses the richness of the faith? Which sounds like it could’ve been written by a precocious child? Which, in short, is beautiful?
Hint: there’s a right answer.
ORIGINAL LATIN
Deus, qui sacramento festivitatis hodiernae universam Ecclesiam tuam in omni gente et natione sanctificas, in totam mundi latitudinem Spiritus Sancti dona defunde, et, quod inter ipsa evangelicae praedicationis exordia operata est divina dignatio, nunc quoque per credentium corda perfunde.
CORRECTED TRANSLATION
O God, who by the mystery of today’s great feast sanctify your whole Church in every people and nation, pour out, we pray, the gifts of the Holy Spirit across the face of the earth and, with the divine grace that was at work when the Gospel was first proclaimed, fill now once more the hearts of believers.
ORIGINAL ICEL TRANSLATION
God our Father, let the Spirit you sent on your Church to begin the teaching of the gospel continue to work in the world through the hearts of all who believe.
Which of these two ICEL translations is more faithful to the original Latin? Which more deeply expresses the richness of the faith? Which sounds like it could’ve been written by a precocious child? Which, in short, is beautiful?
Hint: there’s a right answer.