I agree with cothrige.
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Compare:
Receive, O Holy Father,
almighty and eternal God,
this spotless host, which I,
Thine unworthy servant, offer
unto Thee, my living and true
God, for my countless sins,
trespasses, and omissions;
likewise for all here present,
and for all faithful
Christians, whether living or
dead, that it may avail both
me and them to salvation,
unto life everlasting. Amen.
With:
P: Blessed are you, Lord, God of
all creation. Through your
goodness we have this bread to
offer, which earth has given and
human hands have made. It will
become for us the bread of life.
R. Blessed be God for ever.
Are they both beautiful? Yes, the second has a nice sort of simplicity to it, but the first, in my opinion, creates a grander scope and encompasses more. I happen to prefer the first. Compare the rest:
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