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You’re almost making my case. What 1st yr Latin student would translate Dominus vobiscum as “The Lord BE with you”, changing the theology of a simple phrase? Or render Sursum corda as “Lift up your hearts”? That took a little creativity, did it not? And if you can’t translate it without being creative, then it’s untranslatable in my book.And the text of the mass is not exactly pure poetry. “Ite, missa est”. “Dominus vobiscum. Et cum spiritu tuo. Sursum corda. Habemus ad Dominum. Gratias agamus Domino Deo nostro. Dignum et iustum est.” Where is the untranslatable poetry here?
As far as poetry goes, there is meter, alliteration, rhyme, etc. There’s no way you can retain all of this any more than if you paraphrase a simple English poem. So I don’t follow your logic on poetry.